kiss

May 21, 2003, 5:18 am

my tomorrowsare just run on sentencesstaining pagesin my book of imaginationtears are not strangersto my cheekslife is just a single syllableliving solomarble floors are uselesswhen theres no oneto...

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May 21, 2003, 10:49 pm

Excellent Amberly,life is just a single syllableliving solomarble floors are uselesswhen theres no oneto scratch the tile withdancing in matrimonyforever endedconquered by loneliness Wonderful lines!...

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May 21, 2003, 11:06 pm

Honest, painful, and beautifully written.sioux

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Re: kiss

May 22, 2003, 9:04 pm

thanks so much !

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May 22, 2003, 9:45 pm

A beautiful piece - your words express so vividly the emptiness and loneliness. Thank you for sharing it.Davie

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May 23, 2003, 12:02 am

Amberly, I like the straightforwardness and tightness of this piece.Quote:life is just a single syllableliving soloVery creative and soulful. Thespianna

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May 23, 2003, 1:35 pm

*Wonderful* metaphors and imagery! A world of pain, beautifully captured."Idiot, n. A member of a large and powerful tribe whose influence in human affairs has always been dominant and controlling" -...

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May 23, 2003, 2:22 pm

images of sadness conjured with this fine write J & J

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Re: kiss

May 25, 2003, 3:12 pm

Thanks so much yall!

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May 26, 2003, 4:28 pm

Excellent write!!Oooh, the longing expressed in this piece,creates its own haunting fulfillment.Thanks,CB "Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't." Hamlet. II, ii.

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